“TITIR”…ADORER NAM…DIYECHILO EK DADABHAI…SOHORER-AR 10TA MEYERDER-E MOTON TITIR…NAA BHUL BOLLAM…EKTU ALADA…TOBE AE EKTU TA KINTU MOTE-O EKTU NOI…PORASUNAI COMPLAN GIRL..BIRIYANI NAA KHELE NAKI JIBON TAI BRITHA AR HRITIK ROSHAN AR PIC DEKLE…ORRE BABA K SMLAI OK…TAHOLE KI AMON AACHE J AJ AE BLOG TA LIKTE BOSLAM OR JONNO… DU-CHAR MINUTE SOMOY AACHE???THAKLE DARAN..NA THAKLE-O OSUBIDHA NEI…SHUDHU MAJKHANE LEKHA-TA PORTE PORTE CHERE JABEN NAA PLEASE…TA HOLE J CHOTTO TITIR DUKKHO PAABE…..
CLASS 10 ER STUDENT TITIR…ARREY NA NA AMAR STUDENT NOI..TOBEE JIBONE J ONEK KICHU SEKHA BAAKI SETA ALL TIME BHUJIYE DAI `AAMAR TITIR’…JAANI VABCHEN `AAMAR TITIR’ BOLLAM KANO..TAHOLE NISCHOI…SETAI SAVABIK VABNA…EKTA CHELE JOKHUN EKTA MEYER SOMBONDHE NIJER PERSONAL DIARY-TE LEKHE SEI VABNA TO ASBEI…KINTU AMI AE SOB JINIS LIKHE FALTU SOMOY AR BLOG-AR PAGE TA NOSTO KORTE CHAI NAA…..TITIR-ER EK DADA CHILO…HA CHILO…AJ AR NEI…NA SENTU TE HURT KORBAR KONO EECHA AMAR NEI…BANGLA KOTHAI MARA GAACHE…EKDIN SOKALE SOBAI K TUPI PORIYE MISTI KORE SOBAI K FHAKI DIYE CHIRODINER JONNO BIDAI…TAR O KI JABAR EECHA CHILO…MISTI EKTA BON K CHERE???JAKE TITIR ADOR KORE JORIYE DHORE BOLTO ``DADABHAI’’…
AJ ONEK DIN HOYECHE TAR DADABHAI NEI…AR –E MAJHE TITIR HOYE UTHECHE ENGLISH MEDIUM A PORA PAKA MEYE GULOR MOTON…..FLIRTING…DITCH KORA…KAU K FASANO JENO TITIR AR ROZ NAMCHAR MODHE PORE…TAR OPOR BARITE NET CONNECTION…A TO SONE PE SOHAGA…K BARON KORBE TITIR K???
AR BHALO KOTHA TITIR NAM-TA DHORE AJ AR KAU DAAKE NAA..SOBAI DAAKE PORTIA BOLE….NET-A ONEKER LOVE PROPOSAL O PAI..SUNDOR KORE SEGULO HANDLE KORE…ONEKE ABAR OK BOLE “TOMAI NAA PELE BAACHBO NAA”…SEI GULO K SIDE KORA NAAKI SOBCHE SOHOJ..KI KORE???...OTO JAANI NAA BAPU.
HOTAT NET SURF KORTE KORTE O PELO EKTA FRIEND REQUEST….PROFILE AR PICTURE DEKHE VABLO SANTO SISTO CHELE…CHOLO TA HOLE EKKAI TUPI PORAI…TOKHUN KI AR JAANTO….KI JAANTO???SORRY DADA…SOB-E JODI AKHUNE BOLE DI HALFTIME AR BADAMWALA GULO J AMAI PETABE…SUNTE THAKUN…DEKTE THAKUN..FIRRE ASCHI CHOTTO EKTA BREAK-AR POR……….ETE O BIROTI….UFFF…REMOTE TA KOTHAI RE??? NA,,NA KOTHA-O JETE HOBE NAA AE TO FIRRE ELAM..HAI FIRRE ELAM….TITIR FIRRE PELO…KI??? PICTURE ABHI BAAAKI HAI MERE DOST….NET A CHAT SURU…AR OFFLINE HOLE MAIL…CHELETIR AR TITIR AR SOB POCHONDO-E ALADA…DHATT TERI-KE STORY K PEHLEI TWIST….CHAL DHANNO DUSRI SAWARI PAKARDTE HAI…KINTU PHYSICS AR WAVELENGTH BOLE EKTA CHAPTER AACHE NAA…OI CHAPTER TA KINTU KAAJ-E DILO…TEEN-TE MAIL PAATALO CHELETI…OBAK KANDO…FRIENDLIST THEKEI DELETE KOREDILO OK…DUKKHO PELO CHELETI...ETOTAI KHARAP SE L???TOBE BOLE NAA… “EVEYDAY BRINGS MIRACLES WITH ITSELF”…AMAR OFFICE AR STAIRS A POSTER-A LEKHA ETA…PORER DIN EKTA FRIEND REQUEST PELO CHELETI..NOTUN EKTA PROFILE THEKE..AR PROFILE TAR NAAM TAO SUNDOR “ LIFE 2 BE CHANGED”…OCHENA FRIEND REQUEST…VEBE CHINTE PRESS KORLO ENTER BUTTON TA…AR TAR POR SOB CHANGE…..TITIR EKTA MAIL PATIYECHE “AR SOBAI K CHEAT KORLE-O TOMAI PAARLAM NAA…NIJER DADABHAI K HARIYECHI…..AMAR DADABHAI HOBE????”AR EKTA LINE CHILO…CHOKER JOL VORTI JABSA CHOKE DEKLO CHELETI…”AAMI BHALO HOTE CHAI DADABHAI…AAMI BHALO HOTE CHAI…AAMI TOMAR MOTON HOTE CHAI…AMAR DADABHAI KOTHAO JAI NI…AE TO FIRRE ESECHE…” SONGE SONGE RETURN MAIL PATALO CHELETI…TITIR AR DAAKE DADABHAI SOB SOMOY CHILO…AACHE AR THAKBE…
TOBE SOBCHE BORO KOTHA TITIR TAR AE DADABHAI AR PROTTEK TI KOTHA SONE O MAANE….O-CHENAA…O-DEKHAA EKTA CHELE K BISSAS KORA…MONER MIL KHUJE PAOYA…ARREY WAVELENGTH BOLLAM NAAA……
END TAK SAB TICK HI HO JAATA HAI(ETAI TO DIALOGUE TA)…TITIR PELO DADABHAI K…AR AE DADABHAI HOITO ATODIN POR BUJLO…BON-ER BHALOBASHA KAKE BOLE…HOITO OR SEI DADABHAI-E PATALO AMAI….AR AMAR TITIR AKHUN BHALO HOBAR POTHE…AAPNARA AACHEN TO TITIR AR SAATHE…`LE HALWA’…TITIR AR FAVOURITE WORD…ASHIRBAD KORUN TITIR BHALO HOK…SUKHE THAKUK…AR KI BA DEBEN BOLUN…AAMAR AE CHOTOO BON TITIR K…..:-)
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Acchi shuruaat hai lage raho.........
ReplyDeletedatz so very kind of u or else in dis world people think a boy n a grl can only b a lover n nthng else....
ReplyDeletebhai titir charo o aro keyu ache,your friends,please don't forget them
ReplyDeletelekhata porte giye chokh 2to jhapsa hoye galo.....
ReplyDeleteTitirke boli...u r very lucky.....nischoi bhabcho sob jeneo kano Titirke lucky bolchi?.....because prithibite sob Titir kintu tader dadabhaike pay na,abar onek somoy dadabhaira tader Titirer monta bujhtei pare na,ba bujhte chay na....r sei sob Titirder kache seta kotota koster seta sudhu sei sob Titirrai jane....tai ei Titirke lucky bollam.kichu din hoyto Titir khub kosto peyeche....bt at last o kintu or dadabhaike fire peyeche.r or dadahai or montake bojhe,taito eto sundor likhte pereche.eta ki Titirer kache onek boro paoa noy?wish korchi Titir r or Dadabhaier somporko jano chirokal erokom sundori thake......
r sob seshe Titirer dadabhaike 1ta kotha bolar ache....Titirke eibhabei sneho diye bhoriye rekho......r pray koro prithibir sob dadabhai jano tomar moto hoy.....:-)
if dis is a fiction then hats off to ur imagination,however if this is factual nd u r the "fire paoa dada" thn gr8 job to help Titir regain her true self.
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ReplyDeleteAn awesome piece of story, really a touching one and the thing that need to be noted is the unusual twist that sets the reader glued to the plot. These days people forget the true essence of relationship and human bonding its great thing to see the subject getting it back at such a tender age. And mostly we must give a round of applause for his exquisite style of writing and his sense of humor to lighten up the gloomy atmospheric backdrop. Great job done avijit.. Keep it up…..
ReplyDeleteETA KI REAL LIFE?KHUB TOUCHING N HEAVY.1TA ONNO ROKHOM.KAU KE NIJER BON KE EMNI KORE BHALOBASTE DEKHI NI
ReplyDeleteporte giye kededilam janina titir kemone amr sange kotha hoyni tobe khub iche chelo kotha bolar bt ekhone ichetake puron korte r o besi iche korche.titir sotti khub lucy hoyto avi o otota noy.titir u r so swt khub bhalo theko r khub taratari amr sange kotha bolo ok .
ReplyDeleteand good starting
ReplyDeletehi abhijit,
ReplyDeleteits a lovely story...if it is true a imagination..good & if its a real story..superb...but one thing i just want to query about your relationship..one single question.i can understand that you have a strong feeling for titir...but do titir have the same feeling..it is often found that girls changes their behaviour very often and it is the boys who have to suffer but there are exceptions and i hope that titir is among those exceptions otherwise my dear friend you are in great great trouble...it would be more pathetic for you than titir who have lost her dadavai...so this question is to titir "hi titir,do you have the same strong feeling as abhijit???see the the word "dadabhai" is a very strong word and i hope you too understand the true meaninig of it. i have never met abhijit but from his writting one thing i can surely say that your one mistake in understanding his feeling will bring the loss of one more dadabhai whose alternate you might find but not his parents who will be losing their dear son...so beware of all your feelings and emmotions...and abhijit always follow your heart beacuse i am sure you have a very noble and gentle heart which always gets hurt....both of you god bless you
Khub touchy kichu bolar nai........, hope sob taratari thik thak hoye jabe
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